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 Shockaho: The Exiled ones

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PostSubject: Shockaho: The Exiled ones   Sat Aug 27, 2011 1:52 pm

Name:Shockaho
Home Planet:Kpyto
Life Expectancy:600 years
Current Population:243,565,034
Status:Sentient
Appearance and Anatomy:There size can range from 5,1 to 7,0 male and female are the same height wise. They excell in tech and tend to wear armor around there body. There body is smooth and has no texture. There head has a mark in the middle of it to provide info on there warrior line.They are color many colors but usually wear armor around themselves and there body work differently from normal. There organs are made of a special crystal that would expand when hit. Of course if given enough time it would repair itself and work again



Culture:The culture resolves around the ideal's code, and has been a rather interesting faith for them. The religion about how any problem can be solved by tech, and the will of one's self. They believe in proper care and are mostly of warrior race. They choose to get all over, since they knew most of the planets before there exile. They have sermons and talk to god for support. Even if there aliens, they still respect and embrace religion unlike most of the other races. The religion was created by them, because they through they were better then everyone else.
Abilities:They have Extreme Armor over there body that acts like shield.Once in danger it will spring up and defend it's host body. They also have a Stealth system which would active if they stand still.
History:They had caused the first major war in the past and almost took over but lose to unheeded help. The people were exiled from the universe in the past to a planet. The war was fought in another Universe and not in this one. They had lost and had been sent to this universe but never talked to anyone because of there shame. They use Carnage Crystals to power there weapons and those crystals are only found on there planet. As the many millions of years pasted, they had expanded and brought there race to becoming stronger. They grow closer and closer to coming back out of hiding.


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PostSubject: Re: Shockaho: The Exiled ones   Sat Aug 27, 2011 2:48 pm

More information in Culture, and Appearance.
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PostSubject: Re: Shockaho: The Exiled ones   Sat Aug 27, 2011 2:57 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Shockaho: The Exiled ones   Sat Aug 27, 2011 3:00 pm

Explain how Judaism was brought to an alien race, in the history. Also, the history makes no sense because you don't specify anything, who are the people, what war, and Hagar crystals were created by aliens from another universe.

Appearance could be a lot longer, or find a picture.
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PostSubject: Re: Shockaho: The Exiled ones   Fri Sep 30, 2011 11:48 am

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PostSubject: Re: Shockaho: The Exiled ones   Sat Oct 01, 2011 6:54 am

You didn't change anything.
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